Bad Writing

[Mark A Mandel]

On Fri, 9 Aug 2002, Paul McFedries wrote:

#Actually, Wallraff's column (written with her usual hard-to-fathom
#crankiness) appeared last Sunday:
#
#http://www.nytimes.com/2002/08/04/magazine/04ONLANGUAGE.html

That URL produces no article, but a demand for ID, password, and a lot
of the kind of information that is used to target spam (plus ad-stuff;
this is already edited down):
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-- Mark A. Mandel