[gothic-l] International

[Fredrik]

I've tried to translate the most international song ever to gothic, 
but this far only the refrain. I would like to hear what you think 
about it. If the grammar sucks, or if it too unlike the original etc.

Here's the refrain of The International (L'Internationale):

Weig aftumist and-weiham,
Ga-qimiþ þaírh ga-deþ.
Sa Internatsjonals,
lisiþ þo mana-seþ.


I've also thought about the very famous quot of the communist 
manifesto by Karl Marx, which is some thing like 'workers of all 
countries, unite!' in english, I think. I have two propositions for a 
translation. Please tell me which one you think is better than the 
other or if both of em sucks.

OK, here they are:

1) Arbáidjarjos þize allane lande, ga-qimiþ!
2) Waúrstwans faírhwáus, lisiþ izwis!


Thank you for your oppinion.




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