[gothic-l] Want som comments and corrections

[Fredrik]

Hi!
> 
> I've tried to translate some of the bible into
> gothic. I first thought 
> I should translate the ten commandments of God, but
> I found out that these 
> ten isn't the same in all languages and all
> churches. Acctualy I found 
> totaly thirteen commandments. But anyway, I changed
> my mind and began to 
> translate the part of the bible where the
> commandments are mentioned, exodus 
> 20:1-20:17. I'd like you to comment it and make corrections. There 
are words and grammar that I have been more or less insecure (<- 
spelling?) about. Well, here it is:
> 
> Ur-runs (2:ra Mosaíboka) kap. 20
> 
> Taihun ga-greftais Gudis
> 
> 1. Jah rodida Guths tho allona waurda jah qath:
> 2. Ik im Frauja, Guths theins, saei thuk ustauh fram
> landa Aigwptis, us 
> thiwadwarazna.
> 3. Ni skalt thu alja guthans haban ufar mik.
> 4. Ni skalt thu thus man-leikans aiththau
> taikneinins taujan, ni af thamma 
> in himina jah af thamma ana airthai aiththau af
> thamma in watin uf airthai.
> 5. Ni skalt thu blotan jah skalkinon thaim. Unte Ik,
> Frauja, Guths theins, 
> ist us-dauths Guths, saei ga-weisoth missa-dethais
> fadre ana barnam jah 
> afaram in thridja jah fidworta laithaim, thizeei
> fijand mis,
> 6. ith armaith thusundjos laithans, thizeei frijond
> mis jah ga-greftins 
> meinos haldand.
> 7. Ni skalt thu missa-brukjan namo Fraujins, Gudis
> theinis, unte Frauja skal 
> ni letan ina unwliziths wairthan, saei
> missa-brukeith namo is.
> 8. Ga-munei sabbato dagis thatei weihaith ina.
> 9. Saihs dagos skalt thu arbaidjan jah waurstwa
> theina taujan.
> 10. Ith sibunda dags ist sabbato Fraujins, Gudis
> theinis. Than skalt thu ni 
> waurstwa taujan, ni jah sunus theins aiththau
> dauhtar theina, ni jah skalks 
> theins aiththau thiwairna theina aiththau faihu
> thein, ni jah alja-kunja 
> saei in daurom theinaim ist.
> 11. Unte in saihs dagam ga-skop Frauja himin jah
> airtha jah saiw jah all 
> thanei in thaim sind, ith hweilaida sibunda daga.
> Duthe ist sabbato dagis 
> ga-thiuthiths jah weihaiths af Fraujin.
> 12. Swerai fadar jah mothar theinai, ei thu skalt
> liban laggaba in landa 
> thammei Frauja, Guths theins, thus gibith.
> 13. Ni skalt thu maúrthrjan.
> 14. Ni skalt thu horinon.
> 15. Ni skalt thu stilan.
> 16. Ni skalt thu ga-liuga weitwodjan ana nehwundjan
> theinana.
> 17. Ni skalt thu lustus haban bi razn nehwundjins
> theinis. Ni skalt thu 
> lustus haban bi qen nehwundjins theinis, jah ni bi
> skalk is aiththau 
> thiwairna is, ni bi auhsan is aiththau asilu is, ni
> jah bi sumana thanei ist 
> nehwundjins theinis.
> 
> Alternative for Exodus 20:5
> 
> 5. Ni skalt thu blotan jah hneiwan faura thaim. Unte
> Ik, Frauja, Guths 
> theins, ist aiwiskonds Guths, jah ana-lagjith
> fairina ana barnam jah iuthom 
> in thridja jah fidworta laithaim, bi inwindithom
> attane hatandaize mis.
> 
> /Fredrik






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