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<p>A while ago me and llama translated the International to gothic. But <br>
we only came to the first vers plus chorus. I began with second vers <br>
this summer but aint finnished yet. It would be nice if you would <br>
like to complete it or give some ideas to it.<br>
<br>
/Fredrik<br>
<br>
--- In <a href="mailto:gothic-l%40yahoogroups.com">gothic-l@yahoogroup<wbr>s.com</a>, Michael Erwin <merwin@...> wrote:<br>
><br>
> I mentioned before my efforts to translate labor-movement songs <br>
into <br>
> Gothic - however anachronistic they may be. I paraphrase-<br>
translated <br>
> the first verse and chorus of Ralph Chaplin's "Commonwealth of <br>
Toil" <br>
> tonight. I'm not very good at this but practice makes ... better.<br>
> <br>
> Commonwealth of Toil<br>
> <br>
> by Ralph Chaplin<br>
> <br>
> In the gloom of mighty cities<br>
> mid the roar of whirling wheels<br>
> we are toiling on like chattel slaves of old.<br>
> And our masters ever seek<br>
> to keep us thus beneath their feet<br>
> and to coin our very life-blood into gold.<br>
> <br>
> In sa skadus baurgim mikilaim<br>
> miþ *hjulam *ƕirandam<br>
> arbaidjam samana skalkos aiwe sineiga.<br>
> Jah unsar reikos lustand<br>
> du haban uns atbrukjanda<br>
> jah du *maunetan unsar bloþ du gulda.<br>
> <br>
> Chorus:<br>
> But we have a glowing dream<br>
> of how fair the world will seem<br>
> when we each can live our lives secure and free -<br>
> when the earth is owned by labor<br>
> and there's joy and peace for all<br>
> in the commonwealth of toil that is to be.<br>
> <br>
> Þan habam *glaujand draum af<br>
> ƕaiwa haila airþai wairþiþ<br>
> ƕan ains jah alls skulum libam in friþau -<br>
> ƕan gawaurstwans aigun airþa<br>
> miþ leikainai jah freihala<br>
> in þizos gamainons botos gawaurtswane.<br>
> <br>
> (remaining verses not yet translated)<br>
> <br>
> Okay, the first verse is much more literal than the chorus. I <br>
> couldn't find any suitable common-Germanic root for either roar or <br>
> whirl - the former is only attested in West-Germanic and the <br>
latter <br>
> is first attested in North-Germanic - but decided that they were <br>
> better than nothing (I ultimately chose WG "howl" over WG "roar"). <br>
> The other biggies were "coin," "glow," and, of <br>
course, "commonwealth.<wbr>"<br>
> <br>
> (I wanted to avoid trying the ones with lines like "with one big <br>
> industrial union" for the time being).<br>
> <br>
> To make the meter more-or-less hang together (the syllable count <br>
> should work but the rhythm won't), I subbed "in friþau" <br>
for "secure <br>
> and free" - and subbed "freihala" for "peace" two lines later. <br>
Also <br>
> dropped "that is to be."<br>
> <br>
> Mike<br>
><br>
<br>
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