kjoanne403 at HOTMAIL.COM
Thu Apr 26 03:10:19 UTC 2007
Thanks, Jonathan! I really appreciate the feedback and encouragement. I
agree, I should write the tension symbols under the handshapes... I'll
change that within the next few days.
>From: "Jonathan" <duncanjonathan at yahoo.ca>
>Reply-To: sw-l at majordomo.valenciacc.edu
>To: sw-l at majordomo.valenciacc.edu
>Subject: Re: [sw-l] Sleeping Beauty
>Date: Wed, 25 Apr 2007 07:59:13 -0600
>Hi Kelly Jo,
> My wife and I have been enjoying reading your drafts of sleeping
>beauty. It's always nice to see how other write the signs. I like the
>way you have written "Sleeping Beauty", your signwriting is beautifully
>simple, not overloaded with a lot of extra symbols. It's right for the
>story you are writing. You are doing a really good job. As we are
>fairly new to SignWriting a couple of signs posed difficulty to us on
>the first reading so I thought I would point them out to you in case you
>wanted to modify them.
> On this one we read everything clearly, though the as Val mentioned
>the Tension symbol on the G and Y would look more natural below the symbol.
>kjoanne403 at HOTMAIL.COM wrote:
> > Hi everyone -
> > Here is the first draft of the first part of Sleeping Beauty! I
> > weclome your comments, feedback, etc. ...
> > Kelly Jo
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>Jonathan & Yolaine Duncan
>8-) & ;-)
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