<HTML><HEAD><TITLE>Re: [sw-l] Sleeping Beauty page 17</TITLE> <META http-equiv=Content-Type content='text/html;
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st feedback is related to the punctuation. When I watch the video, I feel that the sentence stop and sentence pause that you have are switched.
More to come. :-)
Adam
On 5/8/07, kjoanne403@hotmail.com <kjoanne403@hotmail.com> wrote:
Managed to get Video 6 done today after all... I probably won't post anything tomorrow, though.
Is the second sign readable, or should I add the beginning position? I should probably write the beginning position, and then I won't even have to write the dot for fingers-closing. I'm a little concerned that you can't tell how many fingers are closing. Agree/disagree?
Any suggestions on CARE? I want to write it like MAKE, but the fingers on the K-hand really get in the way (as you can see).
I think that's all that really gave me trouble on this section. Looking forward to your comments, as always!
KJ
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