<HTML><HEAD><TITLE>Cat in the Hat 1</TITLE>  <META http-equiv=Content-Type content='text/html; 

        charset=iso-8859-1'>  <META content='SignWriting email generated from SignText output' name=PUDDLE></HEAD>  <BODY><table border=1><tr><td valign=top><image src="cid:SignMail-1183741997-1.png"></td><td valign=top><image src="cid:SignMail-1183741997-2.png"></td><td valign=top><image src="cid:SignMail-1183741997-3.png"></td><td valign=top><image src="cid:SignMail-1183741997-4.png"></td><td valign=top><image src="cid:SignMail-1183741997-5.png"></td><td valign=top><image src="cid:SignMail-1183741997-6.png"></td><td valign=top><image src="cid:SignMail-1183741997-7.png"></td></tr></table><p><p>Yay! The weekend is here, I can do some editing. :-)

I was doing some looking at what has been written. Here are some of my feedbacks/reactions.

The timing symbol in TITLE confused me at first reading. But after looking at it closer, I realized what it was for and that it was in the best place. I just felt odd to me. So I looked at the spelling of some other stories that use the same title opening. So that is the suggestion that I wrote here. (I also did the same thing for NONE later in the story.) I also changed the Hs in the title just because it is more standardized to do it that way, but you can keep it the way that you had it.

I took the timing symbol in the brim of the hat because I didn't feel that there was any real movement for the timing symbol to be needed. That and the fact that for some reason having the timing symbol right on the head seems bizarre.

I changed the palm in SUNSHINE and OUTSIDE to be half black and white because having it white didn't seem right.

<p>I played with the spelling of ALL-DAY, and found this to be easier to read with what we have, of course. ;-)

And I also changed the stems on COLD to single stem arrows.

<p>I do have to say that you facial expressions are very well written. Makes it even more believable that it is a story. :-)

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<p>Adam<br><br><hr>

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