Written very well. I enjoyed the story. First page does not have spelling errors that I caught on first read, but there is a grammar error. ;-) You have a rhetorical wh-word question. The eyebrows should be up, not down. <br>
<br>Adam<br><br><div><span class="gmail_quote">On 10/30/07, <b class="gmail_sendername"><a href="mailto:kjoanne403@hotmail.com">kjoanne403@hotmail.com</a></b> <<a href="mailto:kjoanne403@hotmail.com">kjoanne403@hotmail.com
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<br></td></tr></tbody></table><p></p><p>Hi everyone,
</p><p>I got excited about the book again when I was posting earlier, so I got busy this evening and rewrote what I wanted to rewrite. There are seven pages in all (though I don't think #6 really needs proofreading . . . it's only one sign, but I'm going to send it anyway so I don't break up the flow of the story.) As I said earlier, feedback/comments/criticism is welcome!
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