<html><head></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; "><br><div><div>On Apr 26, 2013, at 2:56 PM, Marquita Formosa wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite"><div>Hi all,<br><br>I am sorry for not sending earlier but at the moment together with my thesis I <br>am also having exams and assignments. <br><br>I have tried to do the signs needed fro my demo using the Translate feature on <br>the signpuddle. <br><br>Cherie, Adam,<br><br>May I ask you if you can kindly take a look at the signs I did please in the links <br>below? Thanks in Advance.<br><br>First Sentence<br><br> The cat is white<br> <a href="http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/canvas.php?ui=1&sgn=4&sid=2122">http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/canvas.php?ui=1&sgn=4&sid=2122</a><br></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Looks fine to me.</div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div>Second Sentence<br><br> Who is there?<br> <a href="http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/canvas.php?ui=1&sgn=4&sid=2125">http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/canvas.php?ui=1&sgn=4&sid=2125</a><br></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>This isn't bad either, although I would place the arrow closer to the hand symbol for THERE like below:</div><div><br></div><div><img src="http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/glyphogram.php?size=0.7&ksw=M36x145S1e110n36x6S34600n18xn12S30300n18xn23S21800n42xn9S30c00n18xn12S15d31n3x88S26501n19x72S38900n36x131"></div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div>Third Sentence<br><br> Do you love me?<br> <a href="http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/canvas.php?ui=1&sgn=4&sid=2146">http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/canvas.php?ui=1&sgn=4&sid=2146</a><br></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>The first two are fine for YOU LOVE, but the last sign is not the sign for ME and it would also need to have the raised eyebrows.</div><div><br></div><div><div class="signtextcolumn"><img src="http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/glyphogram.php?size=0.7&ksw=M36x155S10040n10xn145S26500n3xn168S20303n24xn36S203055xn37S3770bn11xn22S37713n9xn21S2050022xn20S20500n28xn19S33e00n18xn75S100432x87S20500n7x110S30a00n18x41S38900n36x141"></div></div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div>Fourth Sentence<br><br> He lives in America<br> <a href="http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/canvas.php?ui=1&sgn=4&sid=2147">http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/canvas.php?ui=1&sgn=4&sid=2147</a><br></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>This is fine.</div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div>Fifth Sentence<br><br> Today the weather is sunny<br> <a href="http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/canvas.php?ui=1&sgn=4&sid=2150">http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/canvas.php?ui=1&sgn=4&sid=2150</a><br></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>I would personally use a different sign for TODAY and I don't think I would use WEATHER for the sentence at all. SUNNY looks really complicated to read. I wonder if there is an easier spelling of it. Here is my try on the sentence.</div><div><br></div><div><img src="http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/glyphogram.php?size=0.7&ksw=M99x46S19a007xn184S19a08n35xn184S22f14n35xn159S22f049xn159S22a0336xn45S2ff00n18xn17S1851145xn68S14c1111xn36S2ef0579xn105S1002070xn95S38800n36x38"></div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div>Sixth Sentence<br><br> What is your name?<br> <a href="http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/canvas.php?ui=1&sgn=4&sid=2157">http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/canvas.php?ui=1&sgn=4&sid=2157</a></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>The last sign is not what would be used for asking this type of question, and you also need to have the eyebrows down. I rewrote it below.</div><div><br></div><img id="fdf27abf-11a9-45ea-8624-cade10b8f795" height="217" width="77" apple-width="yes" apple-height="yes" src="cid:5E904D05-7A34-4AD2-B69D-4E41233908DB"></div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div>Seventh Sentence<br><br> My hair is black. (changed this from eyes to hair and from brown to black)<br> <a href="http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/canvas.php?ui=1&sgn=4&sid=2158">http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/canvas.php?ui=1&sgn=4&sid=2158</a><br></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>I would use a different hand symbol for HAIR and also not use the rims on the head symbols. Probably more my style of writing, but I just find it easier to read without the rims.</div><div><br></div><div><div class="signtextcolumn"><img src="http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/glyphogram.php?size=0.7&ksw=M70x83S15a01n9xn150S20500n13xn134S2ff00n18xn55S208007xn65S26a0729xn83S1ce1015xn71S2650655x23S100127x24S20e0040x25S2ff00n18x20S38800n36x75"></div></div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div>Eighth Sentence <br><br> Where is my Dictionary?<br> <a href="http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/canvas.php?ui=1&sgn=4&sid=2160">http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/canvas.php?ui=1&sgn=4&sid=2160</a><br></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Looks good to me.</div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div>Ninth Sentence<br><br> You are young.<br> <a href="http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/canvas.php?ui=1&sgn=4&sid=2161">http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/canvas.php?ui=1&sgn=4&sid=2161</a><br></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Not bad either.</div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div>Tenth Sentence<br><br> On Saturday I watch a film. (changed this completely as it was The kid is <br>playing)<br> <a href="http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/canvas.php?ui=1&sgn=4&sid=2169">http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/canvas.php?ui=1&sgn=4&sid=2169</a><br></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>The I is wrong here like it was for ME before in "Do you love me?" and WATCH used means to look after rather than to leisurely watch.</div><div><br></div><div class="signtextcolumn"><img src="http://www.signbank.org/signpuddle2.0/glyphogram.php?size=0.7&ksw=M44x159S2e508n11xn160S20300n6xn178S10043n13xn93S20500n17xn68S2650026xn14S1e10119x2S33100n18xn17S15a56n26x119S14c20n26x91S2a4082x70S38800n36x151"></div><div class="signtextcolumn"><br></div><blockquote type="cite"><div><br><br>Please feel free to criticise .. I am here to learn as well ;)<br><br>Thanks in advance<br>Marquita Formosa<br><br><br><br></div></blockquote></div><br></body></html>