<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class="">The facial expressions on MOTORCYCLE shouldn’t be there unless you are using it as a verb, which isn’t the case with this sentence.<div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">The facial expression with MY seems to be off too. I think either remove it or continue it with NEIGHBOR.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Other than that, it looks good to me.</div><div class=""><br class=""><div class="">
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<div><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On Oct 22, 2022, at 7:15 PM, Valerie Sutton <<a href="mailto:sutton@SIGNWRITING.ORG" class="">sutton@SIGNWRITING.ORG</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><div style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class="">SignWriting List<div class="">October 22, 2022</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">ASL Sentence</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Is this good ASL? Would you write it this way? I would love corrections…</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">And I would love to see this sentence in other sign languages too!</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">My neighbors have 4 children, 5 trucks and 9 motorcycles. Wow!</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><img apple-inline="yes" id="5E431C2D-0589-472E-9120-1DB5E6C8E499" width="228" height="448" src="cid:87A42BED-EA74-4B32-8F6A-D8BBDC256904" class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div></div>________________________________________________
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