Written by a (spiritual) descendant of Dickens?

[Marc Velasco]

> > >pieces of hardware can refuse to work. When you add in the added
> > >convenience of accessible-from-anywhere, continuously backed-up, low
> > >administration services,
> >
>
>the rest of these are jargon/near-jargon terms which wouldn't trip up the
>target audience too much.

Nor those in the target audience who can't speak coherent sentences
>
either.  (I know all the jargon here, but I've read better paragraphs.)
>

Ah, a long-honored tradition of tech magazines: Throw enough jargon in an
sentence, and it doesn't matter how its constructed, (hopefully) everyone
will think you know what you're talking about.

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