which we're going to get through this
Mark Mandel
thnidu at GMAIL.COM
Thu Jun 4 17:42:08 UTC 2009
On Thu, Jun 4, 2009 at 10:54 AM, Cohen, Gerald Leonard <gcohen at mst.edu>wrote:
> Arnold's first example looks like a syntactic blend to me:
> ("Actually I drank some green Bigalow tea, which I was
> surprised at how good it was.")
>
> From: "... I drank some green Bigalow tea, which was surprisingly good."
> plus "... I drank some green Bigalow tea , and I was surprised at how
> good it was."
>
As does Jonathan's example, "...if the child is taken to a
treaty-party country, which the United States and Brazil have been
treaty-party countries for many years."
There are some odd uses of "which" in the Harte poem. IMO they are all in
stanzas 1, 3, & 4; the "which"es in the rest I think are pretty standard.
l.1 looks like a conjunction all right, which is weird in any case unless
you take it in context of an ongoing conversation, which may have been the
case in original publication -- I don't know. It also parallels the
occurrence in the first line of the last stanza, where however it is a
normal relative referring to the whole of the events that have just been
narrated.
l.6: relative, to the clause of ll.3-5.
l.15: for "from which", rel. to l.14?
l.19: This one is definitely weird. Discursal conjunction??
(from http://www.bartleby.com/102/200.html)
200. Plain Language from Truthful James
Table Mountain, 1870
WHICH I wish to remark,
And my language is plain,
That for ways that are dark
And for tricks that are vain,
The heathen Chinee is peculiar, 5
Which the same I would rise to explain.
Ah Sin was his name;
And I shall not deny,
In regard to the same,
What that name might imply; 10
But his smile it was pensive and childlike,
As I frequent remarked to Bill Nye.
It was August the third,
And quite soft was the skies;
Which it might be inferred 15
That Ah Sin was likewise;
Yet he played it that day upon William
And me in a way I despise.
Which we had a small game,
And Ah Sin took a hand: 20
It was Euchre. The same
He did not understand;
But he smiled as he sat by the table,
With the smile that was childlike and bland.
...
[FINAL STANZA]
Which is why I remark, 55
And my language is plain,
That for ways that are dark
And for tricks that are vain,
The heathen Chinee is peculiar,—
Which the same I am free to maintain. 60
m a m
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