constructive critique would be appreciated:

[mike r]

Greetings!

Just making sure that the following is correct:


Sa wulfs dreibith ja sa fiskos mitans thans gaitans.

The wolf drives and the fishes measure the goats.


Thai fugls siggwand ja sa thiudans skabith thana
wulfs.

The birds sing and the king shaves the wolf.


Su gaits siggwand ja thai fiskos skaband thans
skulkos.

The goat sings and the fishes shave the servents.


Any guidance will be greatly appreciated.

Salutations!
Mike




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