Cat in the Hat 1

[Adam Frost]

Actually, I am referring to the continuous timing symbol that are the arcs.
Look like (, but not on the side in most of these cases. ;-)

Adam

On 7/6/07, Valerie Sutton <signwriting at mac.com> wrote:
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> July 6, 2007
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> Wonderful to have your feedback now, Adam!
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> I will go back to working on symbols now that you have some
> time...many thanks for this ;-))
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> When you say "timing symbol", I am pretty sure you mean "Tension
> Symbol"? These little symbols are called Tension Symbols, but are
> placed near other timing symbols in the ISWA...so the terms are
> confusing ;-)
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> Adam wrote:
> > Yay! The weekend is here, I can do some editing. :-)
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> > I was doing some looking at what has been written. Here are some of
> > my feedbacks/reactions.
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> > The timing symbol in TITLE confused me at first reading. But after
> > looking at it closer, I realized what it was for and that it was in
> > the best place. I just felt odd to me. So I looked at the spelling
> > of some other stories that use the same title opening. So that is
> > the suggestion that I wrote here. (I also did the same thing for
> > NONE later in the story.) I also changed the Hs in the title just
> > because it is more standardized to do it that way, but you can keep
> > it the way that you had it.
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> > I took the timing symbol in the brim of the hat because I didn't
> > feel that there was any real movement for the timing symbol to be
> > needed. That and the fact that for some reason having the timing
> > symbol right on the head seems bizarre.
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> > I changed the palm in SUNSHINE and OUTSIDE to be half black and
> > white because having it white didn't seem right.
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> > I played with the spelling of ALL-DAY, and found this to be easier
> > to read with what we have, of course. ;-)
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> > And I also changed the stems on COLD to single stem arrows.
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> > I do have to say that you facial expressions are very well written.
> > Makes it even more believable that it is a story. :-)
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> > Adam
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> > Load message into SignText
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> > Courtesy of SignBank.org
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