Help with a sign

[Eduardo Trápani]

Hi!

I'm trying to write this (the sign for pineapple in LSU):

http://programoj.esperanto.org.uy/sw/filmetoj/anana1.avi

This is what I have right now:



But something just doesn't feel right. If it's not ok, could you tell me
what's wrong? Or how to make it simpler?

Eduardo.


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