R: [gothic-l] Re: Attila's Death Song

[Giuseppe Pagliarulo]

Albareiks melida:

>Here is my attempt of Attila's death song in GAV.  Corrections and
comments are welcome.

The song's great!:)
Just a few purely grammatical nitpicks:

>Auhumists Hunnane, Attila thiudans,
>Mundjukin gabaurgans, mahts ains Skwthja,

gabaurans, Skwthjaize

>jah thiudiska reikja, thiutheigs mith manasethai

thiudiskaize reikje, manasedai

>frauja swinthostaizo, fagristaizo thiudo.
>Faurthis unhausidai, hagja braithaize lande,

unhausiths

>reikinoda jah raidida, rannida managa;
>ba tho Rumonje reikja, rimis ni habaidedun,
>usagida jah, ei anthara,
>ni birauboda, ni raupjada imma

raupida

>waurthun, was wuniths, waldufnja lande,

waurtheina

>jeraleikamma gilstram, gultha jah bidom.
>Thanuh alla tho anstai, ni ajukduthai,
>lewis gatawida, listeigs thiudans,
>ne wundufnjai fijande, in wairthidai,
>ni liugna seinaize, lasiwam aitham,
>ak gawairtheigai thiudai, ni waifairhvjandam,
>fahedim faginonds, gafetida waila,

I think gafetiths (strong) would be better.

>inuh wunna gadraus. thata dauthus hvas nu,
>kindinis waila kunthis, ufkunnai wisan,
>thatei ni ainshun, ni andabahtos sunjis,

sunjos

>ni wair ni wins, fraweitan habaith?

Thank you, Albareiks!

Iosef Strawarila
--
                          ...iþ gamain mis ist,
hvaþro afleiþau; jainaþ auk aftra qima.
(Parmainides)





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