Articles setabout (corrected)

[Josh Wilson]

Konstantin, 

With all due respect, your translation has many more problems than just
"article setabout."  You also have spelling errors, several questionable
word choices and oddly constructed sentences, and Russian punctuation
overlaid on English text.

What you need to do, if you want to produce a good translation, is to hire a
native English speaker to proofread this. To find an agency that can do this
simply type "English proofreading" into Yandex or Google - or perhaps
someone else from the list can recommend someone specifically to help you.


Best of luck, 

JW 

-----Original Message-----
From: Slavic & East European Languages and Literature list
[mailto:SEELANGS at listserv.cuny.edu] On Behalf Of Goloviznin Konstantin
Sent: Friday, October 27, 2006 3:50 PM
To: SEELANGS at listserv.cuny.edu
Subject: [SEELANGS] Articles setabout (corrected)

Sorry for the inaccurate previous letter, this one is corrected :)))  
By the way, the text is taken out of the "Cultivation..." 

Here is the translation (edited):

The taoist   secrets  of_love is not another colored philosophical treatise
about  oriental   love ecstasies.That is rather a practical  manual, in
which the secret   teachings essence of_four  different  teachers about
sex, with whom Mantak Chia has learnt, is collected. He had read a great
number of_books, but none of them was explaining exactly how to do this.
Therefore the author  of this two-volumed edition  himself  had  decided  to
write about it. 

The majority of  books on the taoist sex can't  instruct how to transform
the sperm energy already inside gethared, in what place  of the human body
it is better to keep the sexual energy,  how to better exchange it with a
woman, how to enrich  the conserved semen.  Chia sinthesizes  the ancient
taoist practices to simple, but effective methods, which can be mastered by
any person of  the West. 

This first volume is mainly intended  for men, because the men's majority
is sexually weaker. Besides, men lose more energy  at making love, than
women do.

The sexual  inconsistency  between a man and a woman is obvious.  A woman
can  sexually perceive her man as long  as it is pleasant for her. Therefore
taoists say, that her Inn substance is almost inexhaustible. The man's
ability of love making  is  restricted to some quantity of energy, which he
can use  for maintainning his erection.  His Jan substance is more easly
exhaustible.

A woman is sexually  more strong than a man because of  some biological
need. Her reproductive organs have to  stand the exertion  of  the  baby
bearing and nursing.  The influance of this basic biological inequality is
enormous for any man. It generates the chain of his reactions. These
reactions penetrate into his thinking  and sensations on all levels,
including  marriage, work.  Also, they extend their influance  on the
cultural roles, that we want to play in  society,  and spiritual models
being chosen by us  for our inner growth.

The correction  of this sexual inequality could have enormous side
advantages. They  are connected  with establishment of  the  harmonious
society, although  the basic purpose  of  the taoist teaching  about sexual
energy perfecting is the personal health, the spiritual  human perfection.  

Taoists suppose,  that very few men have penetrated  into the secrets of
full using  the sexual energy, which is deeply sleeping  inside their own
bodies.  There is a revolutionary thought  for some  ordinary man, that he
can enjoy the deep and  shining sex  pleasure, that penetrates to the very
core of his being, his feeling,  much exeeding  any usual genital orgasm.  

With respects, 
Konstantin.    

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