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[Don Boucher]

Corrections on poem I sent yesterday, plus translation.

Don Boucher
bouchdon at juno.com
http://www.fortunecity.com/greenfield/dwellers/161/

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From: cory <cory at netroedge.com>
by Cory Cook


Laly ahnkuttie hiyu siah			Time past much far
tillicums chako, mamook piah		people come make fire
mahsh yahwa lapool tatoosh		put there chicken breast
mamook waum, mamook kloshe		make warm, make good

Snass chako, klaska wake cly		Rain come, them not cry
piah mitlite waum pe dly			fire is warm and dry
keschi tillicums klahanie			although people outside
tum tum halo keekwullie			feeling not low

Muckamuck lapool, muckamuck lum	Eat chicken, drink rum
tin tin shantie konaway sun		music sing all day
tanse yahwha okoke illahe		dance there that land
klaska klah, wake elitee			them free, not slave

Tanse kunamoxt opitsa sihks		Dance amongst sweetheart
keekwullie okoke kloshe ole sticks		inside that good old forest
snass kopet, klaska moosum		rain stop, them sleep
ketop tomollo, kloshe tum tum		get up tomorrow, good feeling



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