Haiku

[Fredrik]

Hi!

I'm not that in to poetry but I've made a haiku now...in gothic ofcoz.

As you know a haiku is a japanese poem with three rows with 5 
syllables in the first, 7 in the 2nd and 5 in the 3rd.
I also intend to get the 1st and 2nd to rhyme or sound similar in the 
end. The 3rd row is meant to rhyme with the 3rd of previous part.

I just wanna know if it make any sence at all to you. So here it is:

(There might be errors in both grammar and vocabulary so you may tell 
me if you find any)

Weis iuþôs þiwê,
Bairandans káupajukê.
Stuþidái sijum.

Waúrteis unsarôs,
Swê arbja jah swê gibôs,
Swaswê ins munum.

Eisarna-bandjôs,
Habam fra-liusan ijôs.
Frijei du sunum!

Haírdôs weihandeins,
In þáim waddjus garaíhteins.
Þundôs haíháitum.


/Fredrik






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