can someone correct my grammar

[brynhild84]

Can someone look at the grammar for this first part of a story that I 
have written in Gothic? 
Thanks.
Sai farra, thiudan unsara farith finthith hozd, skalks is gibith aiths 
is hilpith thiudan is.
Agar eis farand weis saiand akran jah itand milith, hlaits ja swein.
Afar 80 dagos barn meina saihwan thiudans skip jah qith: ¡°thiudan 
afraqimith!¡±
Is sitith ana sitls jah gibith skalks is gulth.  Tho gulth skeinand 
leik maurginse liuhath.
Akai mith thamma gulth qamith maurthr ja sair.
Afar 7 dagos qam thata draka.  Liuhath is gibith unsa rigis.  Is 
brimmith baurg unsam ja maurthis barna unsam.
Thiudan unsara gaggith weihan thama draka.  Is swarith: ¡°andizuh ik 
wil kill thama draka aiththau diwan.


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