LL-L "Literature" 2009.09.03 (07) [EN]

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From: Brooks, Mark <mark.brooks at twc.state.tx.us>
Subject: LL-L "Literature" 2009.09.02 (02) [AF]

Howâ€™s this?

Tex-Mex with chili
JalapeÃ±os start a fire
Bald man sweats visibly

Mark Brooks

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From: R. F. Hahn <sassisch at yahoo.com>
Subject: Literature

Mark,

"Visibly" seems rather un-haiku and even un-senryu to me. "The bald man's
sweating" or "Sweat on/from the bald head" seem better IMHO.

Regards,
Reinhard/Ron
Seattle, USA

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