Sleeping Beauty
Jonathan
duncanjonathan at YAHOO.CA
Wed Apr 25 13:59:13 UTC 2007
Hi Kelly Jo,
My wife and I have been enjoying reading your drafts of sleeping
beauty. It's always nice to see how other write the signs. I like the
way you have written "Sleeping Beauty", your signwriting is beautifully
simple, not overloaded with a lot of extra symbols. It's right for the
story you are writing. You are doing a really good job. As we are
fairly new to SignWriting a couple of signs posed difficulty to us on
the first reading so I thought I would point them out to you in case you
wanted to modify them.
On this one we read everything clearly, though the as Val mentioned
the Tension symbol on the G and Y would look more natural below the symbol.
Jonathan
kjoanne403 at HOTMAIL.COM wrote:
>
>
> Hi everyone -
>
> Here is the first draft of the first part of Sleeping Beauty! I
> weclome your comments, feedback, etc. ...
>
> Kelly Jo
>
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> Load message into SignText
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> ba68a2f03e4589329e812be6f40bf20f = ba68a2f03e4589329e812be6f40bf20f
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--
Jonathan & Yolaine Duncan
8-) & ;-)
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