Sleeping Beauty

[K.J. Boal]

Thanks, Jonathan!  I really appreciate the feedback and encouragement.  I 
agree, I should write the tension symbols under the handshapes... I'll 
change that within the next few days.

KJ

>From: "Jonathan" <duncanjonathan at yahoo.ca>
>Reply-To: sw-l at majordomo.valenciacc.edu
>To: sw-l at majordomo.valenciacc.edu
>Subject: Re: [sw-l] Sleeping Beauty
>Date: Wed, 25 Apr 2007 07:59:13 -0600
>
>Hi Kelly Jo,
>     My wife and I have been enjoying reading your drafts of sleeping
>beauty.  It's always nice to see how other write the signs. I like the
>way you have written "Sleeping Beauty",  your signwriting is beautifully
>simple, not overloaded with a lot of extra symbols.  It's right for the
>story you are writing.  You are doing a really  good job.  As we are
>fairly new to SignWriting a couple of signs posed difficulty to us on
>the first reading so I thought I would point them out to you in case you
>wanted to modify them.
>     On this one we read everything clearly, though the as Val mentioned
>the Tension symbol on the G and Y would look more natural below the symbol.
>
>Jonathan
>
>kjoanne403 at HOTMAIL.COM wrote:
> >
> >
> > Hi everyone -
> >
> > Here is the first draft of the first part of Sleeping Beauty! I
> > weclome your comments, feedback, etc. ...
> >
> > Kelly Jo
> >
> > ------------------------------------------------------------------------
> > Load message into SignText
> > 
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> >
> >
> > Courtesy of SignBank.org <http://www.signbank.org>
> >
> > ba68a2f03e4589329e812be6f40bf20f = ba68a2f03e4589329e812be6f40bf20f
> >
>
>--
>
>Jonathan & Yolaine Duncan
>8-)  & ;-)
>

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