[Sw-l] ASL Sentence - need feedback

[Adam Frost]

The facial expressions on MOTORCYCLE shouldn’t be there unless you are using it as a verb, which isn’t the case with this sentence.

The facial expression with MY seems to be off too. I think either remove it or continue it with NEIGHBOR.

Other than that, it looks good to me.


Adam

> On Oct 22, 2022, at 7:15 PM, Valerie Sutton <sutton at SIGNWRITING.ORG> wrote:
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> October 22, 2022
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> ASL Sentence
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> Is this good ASL?  Would you write it this way? I would love corrections…
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> And I would love to see this sentence in other sign languages too!
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> My neighbors have 4 children, 5 trucks and 9 motorcycles. Wow!
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